Thanks. And yeaaaaa the formatting kinda got messed up, I messed with the coding of it as you probably know when you try to edit it comes up in some jibberish. The events, sure are original, but I have never seen the basketball event in action. I will definitely have more creative events in the future that I think out more. Thanks for the advice.
Events seem... unoriginal? Something to improve on if you get accepted. I understand its harder now to make original events but a lot if not all of your events have been done before and regurgitating the same events over and over except slightly improved isn't *great*. Basketball has been done *cough* MACE NBA *cough*.
Overall. Decent and if you do get accepted just needs *some* work with regards to events and brainstorming.
Thank you. I had a hard time coming up with original events, and the ones that I thought of were just boring/mingy. If I do get accepted I will think longer on events and make them unoriginal as possible. Also, if needed, I can make up a longer/unoriginal event.
Another thought, maybe I could make a artillery station? I could grab a CO from a side and have them use it. Just a thought though. edit (it could launch headcrab canisters and they could pick a target)
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Events seem... unoriginal? Something to improve on if you get accepted. I understand its harder now to make original events but a lot if not all of your events have been done before and regurgitating the same events over and over except slightly improved isn't *great*. Basketball has been done *cough* MACE NBA *cough*.
Overall. Decent and if you do get accepted just needs *some* work with regards to events and brainstorming.
former hgm, npu dvl (sentry), lvet co
Another thought, maybe I could make a artillery station? I could grab a CO from a side and have them use it. Just a thought though. edit (it could launch headcrab canisters and they could pick a target)
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Former KILO NCO
Former RF Squad CO
HMMMM my brain hurts now i cant think
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former hgm, npu dvl (sentry), lvet co
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